Some people believe that car free days are affective ways to reduce air population. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion .

Today more and more

community

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communities

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feel that designed

car-free

days

are successful ways to bring

air

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the air

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population

. The advocates of

this

view argue that

cars

should be few to reduce

air

population

. Others,

however

, disagree and

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that there are alternative ways that are more and more effective. On the one hand, those in favour of keeping clearness

air

pulopulation

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population

, because most of the

people

feel better in the fresh

air

.

This

has valid reasons to be concerned about

air

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the air

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population

.

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,

because

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many countries have tremendous factories and different automobiles. The

air

population

is not always good. But many countrysides

than

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have a cleaner

air

population

than cities. The reason for

this

is there aren't many factories and station

wagon

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wagons

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. That's why the

air

here is clean. ,

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there don't industry extra gases and hazardous substances and everything is natural. In my view

also

other countries decrease pollutants and the laws existing in the country need to be aimed at

car-free

days

and improving safeguard the

air

population

.

On the other hand

, there are many

people

who would argue that the

car-free

days

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damage not only the

air

population

,

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but

also

people

.

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,

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variety

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type of

cars

relieves our lives.

Therefore

, others disagree and believe that don't need to

car-free

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days

. Indeed,we need to somewhere urgent situation to

cars

.

For example

, when

people

want to go

to

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abroad or hospital long distances they need to

car

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the car

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. But now different types of

cars

are producing

and

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more gas which is harmful to health and

air

. In conclusion,

although

the hazardous for

air

population

besides

our health. There is a need for

the

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car-free

days

to be regulated by introducing strict politics. In my

opinion

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both sides are correct.