It is responsibility of government to take care of health of citizens or citizens should take care of their own health. Give your opinion.

People have different views about whether governments or individuals should be responsible for the retirement/

health

/ unemployment problem of the population. In my opinion, I believe that both authority and citizens should be accountable and collaborative efforts are needed to address

this

issue. On the one hand, the authority has the liability to improve public welfare. Significant taxes should be imposed on junk food, which is detrimental

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health

status and leads to various diseases

such

as diabetes and obesity, and

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can help to discourage people to consume burgers, carbonated drinks and fries.

Moreover

, governments could invest in

public

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hospital

system

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systems

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to improve the quality of service and reduce the cost of medicines. If a better public

health

service is provided,

for example

, patients will benefit from

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and save their time as well as a large amount of money. In

this

way, citizens could have access to an improved quality of life.

On the other hand

, residents themselves should

also

take

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responsibilities

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responsibility

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for their own

health

issue

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issues

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.

Firstly

, they should choose a healthy lifestyle rather than a sedentary one.

For instance

, people should adapt to cycling or jogging

instead

of driving to work if their commuting trip is short.

This

can not only benefit their

health

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but

also

helpful

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to improve air quality, which

also

leads to

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diseases and longer life expectancy.

Secondly

, complementary

health

insurance is

also

needed to ease their financial burden when citizens are in serious

health

conditions. In conclusion, I believe that

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better physical and mental conditions for each individual could only be achieved by the mutual collaboration between authorities and residents.