Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspapers or watching TV. Do you think it is a positive development?

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can be clearly seen, technology is developing day by day.
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people read the
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they need in two different ways,
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is from
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and the other is from
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Internet
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a positive with examples. On the
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hand, due to the development of technology most people do not
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newspapers
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and
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of the advantages of
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is that it is convenient for the elderly because most of the elderly cannot
use
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the
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.
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, my grandmother reads daily
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from
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and magazines
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ever
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day.
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,
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of the disadvantages of
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is that it can be damaged
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the environment because they become useless after
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away and
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pollution.
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, almost 80
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of the population,
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especially
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especially
, the young generations,
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the
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and it is a good
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ever
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way, not only read
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but
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online
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shopping,
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knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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and other.
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, if we
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the
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a lot, we have a good chance to change our
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.
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, online
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and
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TV for a longer time will negatively
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health.
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, eyesight and back or neck pain. Despite
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, these days, everyone has a mobile phone and is connected to the
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. In conclusion,
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both of them have benefits and negatives, I personally believe that, if we
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whichever
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we prefer, that will be effective for us.
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, their
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accelerates development.
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