Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspapers or watching TV. Do you think it is a positive development?
As
it
can be clearly seen, technology is developing day by day. Correct pronoun usage
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That is
why,
people read the Remove the comma
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news
they need in two different ways, one
is from newspapers
and the other is from Internet
. In Add an article
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a positive with examples.
On the one
hand, due to the development of technology most people do not use
newspapers
and one
of the advantages of newspapers
is that it is convenient for the elderly because most of the elderly cannot use
the Internet
. For instance
, my grandmother reads daily news
from newspapers
and magazines Correct your spelling
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ever
day. Correct your spelling
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However
, one
of the disadvantages of this
is that it can be damaged for
the environment because they become useless after Change preposition
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use
and thrown
away and Add a missing verb
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causes
pollution.
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On the other hand
, almost 80 percent
of the population, Change the spelling
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especially
espacially
, the young generations, Correct your spelling
especially
use
the Internet
and it is a good Correct your spelling
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ever
way, not only read Correct your spelling
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news
but also
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knowledges
and other. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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Besides
, if we use
the Internet
a lot, we have a good chance to change our career
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careers
Nevertheless
, online news
and watch
TV for a longer time will negatively Wrong verb form
watching
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health. Change the verb form
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For example
, eyesight and back or neck pain. Despite this
, these days, everyone has a mobile phone and is connected to the Internet
.
In conclusion, although
both of them have benefits and negatives, I personally believe that, if we use
whichever one
we prefer, that will be effective for us. In addition
, their use
accelerates development.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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