With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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lead

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increment

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increase

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of elderly

people

. Whether

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society

needs to be analysed. The following paragraphs clearly examine why

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I agree that

people

can cope with aged

people

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advanced technology for health

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, it can really help to automate many things and by that

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care takers

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can take less time

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treating the elderly and they will be

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independent

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independent

to some extent.

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, taking

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of many elderly might be a

tidious

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tedious

task for

people

, but with the help of automated technical

devices

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they can reduce the intensity of work. To make it more clear, elderly

people

needs

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more

care

and clear observation needed if they have serious problems,

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if there are many aged

people

are

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there, it is very difficult for the carers to reach out

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individual

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simultaneously

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simultaneously

.

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situation can be resolved by

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modern

health

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healthcare

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care

units.

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, automated wheel-chares help the elderly to travel without

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help.

Hence

, it is clear that if

people

are independent at some level

society

can relatively cope with older

people

.

However

, there are times when elders are very needy.

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of the elderly to adapt

with

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modern

society

can be a strenuous task for

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society

. For more clarification, it is clear that

elderly

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always stick with the

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indigenous

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indegenous

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indigenous

idea of treatment and so on. So,

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society

might have to take alternate measures in order to keep the balance of

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society

. In conclusion, it is clear that

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society

can cope with aged ones if they are willing to adapt

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modern

society

. The more they are accepting the modern generation the more they get

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care

.