Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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around the globe:

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developed

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and

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poor or developing ones. It is true, indeed, that many of the richer

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are providing financial

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aids

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to poorer developing

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, despite the fact that it does not successfully eradicate the

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of

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, I strongly agree that other solutions must be introduced to deal with the issue, alongside

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the existing financial

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. There are numerous reasons why

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is a big

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in some

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where monetary supports from other

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are essential.

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that are constantly suffering from extreme weather, natural disasters and wars are normally those with weaker financial ability as the basic necessities like food and accommodation of citizens are not fulfilled due to

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of their agriculture farms and residential areas, not to mention the money-earning industries. Financial

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from richer

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are needed to help these unlucky ones to rebuild and recover from unfortunate events.

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, they will remain as

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due to the scarcity of resources and the

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of

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will never be resolved.

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,

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in other aspects,

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as providing job and academic opportunities to their people are

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needed to mitigate the issue of

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introducing more of them to the academic and working realms, developed

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help them to pick up skills and knowledge that can later be brought back to their homeland to assist in industrialisation and

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prevention, which in turn foster the development of their

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. The root cause of

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must be addressed in order to combat the

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and it is doubtless that illiteracy is the major culprit. By receiving higher and in-depth education, they can learn about economic models and will be inspired to change the current situation of their mother nation. In conclusion,

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it is insufficient to solve

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solely by providing financial

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aids

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to

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poor

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approach is still significant. Developed

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should

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seek ways to assist

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providing educational and job opportunities to the citizens of poor

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