Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that songs are a universal language. It is often believed

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some that audio tracks can unite nations

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a multicultural

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To begin

with, no one can deny that

music

is multi-lingual. In fact, translation is not necessary for it to be heard.

For instance

, a lot of people listen to melodies without even understanding

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word.

This

is because, the crowd usually tend to feel the beat with their hearts, not hearing with their ears.

As a result

, different cultural backgrounds do sometimes unite while enjoying a musical piece.

Music

concerts,

for example

, are always full with the most audience joining.

Furthermore

, some symphonies are eternal.

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17 years old teenager to as old as 70 years old elder may, in my opinion, get excited when listening to some interesting

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art. To illustrate, it is undeniable that Mickle Jackson’s songs are one of the most loved and downloaded mp3s of all time.

Moreover

, there is no age limitation when it comes to

music

. To illustrate

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point, you can talk about it with someone you have just met, and yet be surprised about the common taste you may both posset. In conclusion, opera, rap, rock, and country pieces are, in my

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, considered a uniting method, a good tool of communication between societies. That’s why I wholeheartedly believe that

music

breaks down barriers.