You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter - Explain what happened to your watch - Describe your watch - Ask the manager to help you find it

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Dear Andrew, I recently stayed at your resort and unfortunately have misplaced my watch over there. On the

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day of my stay, I went for a swim and

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of submitting the valuables to pool area storage, I placed

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on one of the resting chairs surrounding the pool.

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, after the dip, I rushed to my room and forgot to collect the same. My watch is a limited edition MK Smartwatch and has my initials MB inscribed on the back of the dial.

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, it has silver mesh straps and a digital censor on the screen. I would request you to kindly look for it in the pool area.

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, enquire in the lost and found section if it has been submitted there.

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, I will be happy to reward any hotel staff if they can find the watch on their end. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

Mohika

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Monika

Submitted by mohikabhatia.97 on Sat Nov 05 2022

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