Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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According to the prompt, people believe that children should be encouraged to initiative
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for the
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in their free
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as unpaid, which can be
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for teenagers and society. From my perspective, I will agree with
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statement by following two reasons that are given in below and support the thesis.
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of all, the youngster should be involved in unpaid social
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;
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will create positive attitudes towards society. During their spare
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, they should utilize their
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by supporting the
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that can do anything,
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as encouraging the child for their future goal and giving proper guidance according to their condition.
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, in a country like INDIA, the population is in poverty and itinerates where they can't take
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education from school; youngsters can contribute by giving tuition classes to poor kids who cannot afford the education in school.
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, most youngsters have free
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to play games and other bad habits. They can utilize
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in a good way. They should give leisure
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by participating in volunteer
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as blood donation camps, promoting education
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, and other activities; they can gain knowledge from society and experience.
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would be helpful for the youngster for their future. To summarize, unpaid
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service will benefit young people not only for their experience
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but
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for their ability to participate equally
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societal and communal improvement.
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, I will support the
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's belief that youngsters should be active in the organization and contribute for free.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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