Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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education from school; youngsters can contribute by giving tuition classes to poor kids who cannot afford the education in school.
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would be helpful for the youngster for their future.
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's belief that youngsters should be active in the organization and contribute for free.Use synonyms
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