Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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public

health

sports

can play a vital role. It is said that “

Health

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mind is a healthy body”. So, people believe

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amount of

sports

activity

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activities

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can improve public

health

, and

this

way

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better

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option.

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, some people say that

sports

alone would not effective

way

for

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improve

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health

, and

also

need

others

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other

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facilities. From my perspective, I will mostly agree with

this

statement by following two reasons that are given in below. On the hand,

people’s

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belief

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believe

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that lots of

sports

facility

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facilities

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significantly improve

the

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apply

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health

condition and make fit.

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of

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apply

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youngsters

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the youngsters

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influence

sports

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by sports

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advertisement

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and desire to involve in

sports

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the sports

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activity

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activities

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. From different data research, it will find that

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those who

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play any

sports

activity

they

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are more live as compared with

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does

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not play/involve

any

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in any

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kind of

sports

. On contriver, some people say that not only

sports

activity

would have improved

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public

health

, apart from

this

,

we

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but we also

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need another measure to live

healthy

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healthily

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whereas must maintain

diet

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a diet

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, physical

activity

and mundane lifestyle work and another lot of

works

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work

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that contribute

in

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this

.

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of

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the

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gym lovers,

they

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take steroids and pills to gain muscle size and they think it would be

better

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way

for

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health

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their health

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but they did not know they are increasing muscle size

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in

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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way

. So, it is not necessary, we only focus on

sports

, despite, we should think about diet and what are we taking? From my perspective,

Sports

activity

would improve

health

problem

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problems

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but it is not necessarily only

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a plethora

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of type

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type

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types

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of

sports

would

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that would

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better

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be better

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way

,

this

option only contributes part of

health

improvement, whereas,

lot

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of factors depend for

improve

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improving

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health

issues. To conclude, plenty of games/

sports

activity

along with

others

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other

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physical

activity

would be

effective

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an effective

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strategy for

enhance

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enhancing

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person’s

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a person’s

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life and

maintain

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maintaining

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their

health

.