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Some universities deduct students’ marks if work is given late. What is your opinion and recommend some alternative actions for this problem?

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There are certain tasks
students
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 are expected to complete while studying at a university. One of them is the assignments but some teachers deduct
marks
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 if the assignments are submitted late.
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 essay will discuss how
this
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 practice is useless for the development of
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.
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 with, the fear of deduction of
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 might force the
students
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 to copy the practice in order to submit it on a date without understanding it.
As a result
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, the
students
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 do not learn anything new about the topic as well as they do not develop skills of critical thinking.
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, most of the universities in rural areas of Pakistan still give fewer
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 if the job is submitted not on the day and
students
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 of these universities perform poorly when they compete with other
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 of Pakistan in analytical tests
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 as NTS and GRE.
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,
this
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 practice should be stopped in order to promote learning among
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. There are numerous other methods to encourage a student to submit homework on time. One of them is to have a competition for the best chore in a month, which will make
students
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 submit on time and they will try to improve the quality of their work, promoting learning.
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, the best concept that I developed at the university was in the subject of "Theory of Structures" as our teacher used to give 1000 rupees for the best assignment of the week.
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,
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 steps should be taken
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 of deducting
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. In conclusion, forcefully submitting tasks on time is not useful but other methods
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 as holding a competition for the best homework will give better results in terms of learning. In my opinion, more different methods should be developed to promote learning
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 of deducting
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