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Watching television is bad for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#television #children
I think watching
televisions
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is a bad idea but sometimes it can be useful.,Actually it depends on how many minutes
do
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people or
kid's spend
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 their
time
 in front of the
the
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televisions
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.We know that watching TV isn't good for
kid's
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because of their brain development.When they
are
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watch the television
in
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hourly that effected their brain function.
That is
 why they shouldn't spend their
time
 in front of the television.we all know kids love to music,dance or cartoon.
On the other hand
, we know Watching
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television
televison
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television
bring
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 many advantages
such
 as enjoyable thing.
That is
 why find all of the enjoyable things
in
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 television.Yes
of course
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 they sometimes can
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watch
wacth
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watch
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Television
Televison
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Television
 but all the
time
 we need to be careful,
what
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 they watch.
In
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 ,conclusion We do
it
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a more outdoor activity for the
kid's
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and spend with them quality
time
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