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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities ,countrysides and oceans. What problems does it cause ? And what measures can be taken.

#plastic #waste #cities #countrysides #oceans #measures
It has been universally acknowledged that our surroundings are being polluted by
over use
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 of
plastic
.
Waste
 of
plastic
 is extremely harmful
for
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 whole mankind along with aquatic life. Apart from spoiling
topmost
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 layer of agricultural land,
plastic
 has become a curse for stray animals and
acquatic
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aquatic
 life. Awareness and proper disposal can help in fixing
this
 hazard.
This
 essay will shed light on visible causes and
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possible
possile
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possible
 measures to curb
this
 curtail in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are plenty of things to be shared to manifest the fact
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plastic
waste
 is leading humans towards their doom. The mammoth conspicuous effect of
this
 negative approach is the
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 of
upper
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layed
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layer
 of
earth
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 which
it
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being
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 used for agricultural activities.
For instance
, a survey was conducted by a news channel underlying the fact that 80% of agricultural land is
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 productivity, owing to
the
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plastic
waste
. To be more specific, the part of
farm land
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 which is covered by
plastic
 bags or bottles turned barren forever.
Moreover
, sea animals are
also
 dying due to
the
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plastic
waste
 as it has covered the upper layer of water bodies.
As a result
,
plastic
waste
 is working as
gradual
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 bomb to destroy the world. Moving
further
 to the conception, some simple and valuable solutions can be followed.
Although
 people are using
plastic
 for positive development yet they are destroying their planet unknowingly. So,
the
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governments must start some
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campaigns
campaingns
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campaigns
 to
aware
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 public
regarding
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 the disposal of
plastic
waste
.For example, seminars and live shows can do
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 in
this
 field.
Furthermore
,
this
 topic must be taught at schools. By adding
this
 issue
in
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school
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curriculmn
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curriculum
, it will certainly help to solve the problem .So, governments and all human beings should work together to curtail the issue. To recapitulate, a horrible increase can be seen in
plastic
consequently
, it has become a monster problem for
whole
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mankind
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.Before using
plastic
, everyone must be aware
about
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proper
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 disposal of
such
waste
 so that the problems can be solved to save the earth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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