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In some countries, some people encourage students to find part-time jobs, while other people don't. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There are different opinions on whether
students
 should
work
 or not. While some argue that
students
 better
work
, others claim that they should only study. I, on my part, believe that studentship ought to try to find the right balance between studies and
work
. To commence with the view of the former group, there are two reasons behind their position.
First
 is that working while studying is a good opportunity to make pocket money. The majority of freshmen are shy to ask their parents for money, which is why freshmen start working part-time jobs.
For instance
, my neighbour Ali has to
work
 waiter because he needs money in order to study.
In addition
 to
this
, If
students
 begin jobs in some places they have significant experiences. After graduating they can boss in their sphere.
Hence
, they won't employ anyone. Definitely, other arguments exist too, but the ones mentioned, I believe, do stand out. Turning to the latter group's point of view, they
also
 have their own grounds to justify the position they hold.
First
 of all, If
students
 decide to
work
, they will have less time for studies.
This
, in turn, will affect the quality of education. Aside from
this
,
students
' years are the golden years of life. Those who
work
,
however
, lose their studentship and in the future regret missed opportunities to enjoy that stage of life. The availability of other arguments is undeniable, but mentioning them is not worthy. In conclusion,
although
 the opinions of people regarding whether they ought to
work
, If you have the upper hand vary, I am convinced that
students
 need
work
,
moreover
, they have to choose the job carefully!
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