It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.

Your opinion

Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the past, most people lived in the small village where everyone knew every else. Nowadays, most people live in the large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Parents should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well anbd give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.