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Some people believe that teachers should not give homework to the school students. Others, however, contradict and consider that it is necessary for their education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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schooling system differs from one place to another but all of them agree on giving
homework
 to their students which made some people disagree with that point due to their beliefs on the topic yet I believe that it is crucial for the students. on one ,hand the people that believe that teachers should drop giving
homework
 might be because they think it is already enough effort for the young people to follow the course in class let alone making them make extra efforts at home and
also
 based on their beliefs
homework
 is part of the old schooling system
way
 before technology made its
way
 to the schools and since they are studying on their tablets they get to save the whole course while in class and take a look at it whenever they need so there is no need for the teachers to evaluate them.
on the other hand
 , the other majority including myself do believe it is necessary for the teachers to give
homework
 as it is the
way
 to make sure the student is up to date with everything going on inside class and that he comprehends the courses and it is
also
 a
way
 for the teacher to see what each student is lacking by going through each of their answers and can focus and make a special program for each kid to reinforce their lacks . in ,conclusion
homework
 is necessary and should be kept existing no matter what are the circumstances because it's the main pillar school is based on.
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