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There is little difference in the shops now operating in various nations. Some people think this is positive development,while other believe it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In my opinion,
shops
 in various countries have to be different from others because of some cultural features. Maybe we can’t see the difference between American and European
shops
, but I think we can see it in Arabic countries,
for example
. The thing is, nowadays the most popular
shops
 in almost every
country
 are from big
corporations
 and most of them are from the USA. I think it is a reason why we can see similar
shops
 in each
country
 of the globe. Of
course
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 there are many local
shops
, but many business owners think that there is a standard of business and they are trying to make their own
shops
 similar to the
shops
 of big
corporations
. In my opinion, it is a sad story because in
this
 world of big
corporations
 we can lose the identity of each nation. I don’t want that because every
country
 should have its own features and its own local
shops
 that will make
this
 nation special and provide
it’s
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 own development. Of course, there is a positive point of view because when you travel a lot you can be sure that you can find everything
in
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 every piece of the Earth and it will not be difficult. You can find almost every shop you can see in your home
country
 and even take a
guarantee
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 service in every
country
 you’ve visited, despite the fact that you bought an item in another
country
. It is a positive development
of
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for
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 big
corporations
, and
as
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apply
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I think, it is the main factor why people think that it is a good tendency
of
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for
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distribution
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the distribution
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shops
 of big companies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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