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some people think that modern invention have more problem as compared to their benefits .do you agree or disagree?

#people #invention
Nowadays, we cannot deny that
innovation
 has influenced a major part of our lives.
Technology
 leads us to be more convenient and comfortable;
however
, errors in software might occur resulting in crime on a network.
Therefore
, there are both benefits and trouble in the modern world. Since
innovation
 makes our lives easier than previous,
people
 depend more on
technology
such
 as robots or machines which almost have functioned the same as
humans
.
For instance
, before modernization,
people
 usually did housework by themselves. Cleaning the room and washing dishes had been done by hand. When the
innovation
 was created, our lives changed completely. Whether its processes
being
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 complicated or not
people
 are interested in how to use it because of convenience.
Moreover
, advanced
technology
 makes
people
 spend less amount of
time
 on jobs and have more
time
 to enjoy life.
Otherwise
, all
technology
 consists of software
which
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people
 can access data easier.
Although
 the level of data security has been
a
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concerned
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 and debated around the world, the false error rate is still high.
For example
, the
first
 series of Face IDs by Apple had
been
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mentioned its security and privacy
of
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humans
. As the false positive level was quite worrying, some
people
 had hacked their phones by scanning their faces images, and their mobiles is unlocked.
However
, many have said the benefits of face scanning outweigh its disadvantage. To sum up, modern
innovation
 has resulted in
the
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pleasure for
humans
.
People
 spend less
time
 while remaining
time
 to do favourable activities. Even though
humans
receives
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such
 benefits, problems from the
errorness
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errors
 of the invention might lead them to insecurity.
Therefore
, we allow to use
technology
 freely but should be concerned about personal privacy.
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