You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am steve, I am writing

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letter as thank you note for providing a funfilled holiday for my family. As my family has planned to take a

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of Australia for 5 nights and 6 days .I boarded my flight from Mumbai international airport to Sydney and

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to Melbourne and Brisbane . I would like to thank you for the itinerary planned for my holiday along with the sightseeing and meals provided during the

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. I loved the Sydney city experience and the night sightseeing

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of the opera house . My entire family loved that experience and like it .

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, I like to give a few suggestions regarding

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tour

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. The

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should be of One week's duration and include a

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of Melbourne tram services and Brisbane , Melbournes cricket stadium along with the museum of cricket in Melbournes cricket ground . ,

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some Indian snacks should be provided during stay in Sydney. Looking forward to hearing from you Your's Sincerely Steve John

yash334Sun Nov 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

175 words

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