In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Selecting a place to live is a big decision. At the present time, many people value their own accommodation because it is a sense of achievement rather than renting a house which could not save money. I believe that ownership is a natural human desire, and it is a profitable investment as well.
Nowadays, many individuals seek to buy their own house in order to live in a piece of mind.
Although
they might struggle a lot to collect money, they insist on purchasing private property as per their needs. Linking Words
For instance
, in many Linking Words
western
countries, people mortgage and take loans from banks so that they Capitalize word
Western
could
pay for their private apartments. Wrong verb form
can
Whereas
, living as a tenant, not only one must abide by the rules and regulations set up by the landlord, but Linking Words
also
he cannot have anything repaired or renovated. Linking Words
Thus
, it is imperative to have a home where one can live peacefully.
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Nonetheless
, I am convinced that owning a home has many positive aspects Linking Words
such
as having the freedom Linking Words
in doing
many things. persons will not Change preposition
to do
get bounded
to anyone's rules and they can renovate their flat as many times as they want. Taking myself as an example, when I used to reside in a rented apartment Verb problem
be bound
last
year, I could not even move a refrigerator from its place to another one, nor could I change the furniture. Linking Words
That is
why having a home is essential for thriving in society. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it gives a sense of satisfaction which cannot be felt in rented ones. Linking Words
Therefore
, it can be said that living in your own accommodation is a feeling of stability and safety.
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To conclude
, a place to live truly depends on the dwellers whether they are tenants or owners. Linking Words
However
, I am of the belief that renting houses cannot save money, Linking Words
while
ownership can.Linking Words
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