You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request a change in my accommodation
room
and also
to notify Correct pronoun usage
you on
on
the problems that I am facing during my stay.
I live in Change preposition
of
"Floral"
building, Correct article usage
the "Floral"
room
number 252. I am a research student and my work mainly consists of hands-on
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the hands-on
a hands-on
project
after my college hours. My roommate is Fix the agreement mistake
projects
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an art's
art's
student who mainly deals with Change noun form
art
culture
arts for various programs. Not only he practices in the Replace the word
cultural
room
which creates quite a lot of disturbance for me but also
there are many of his friends coming
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come
room
,
when I work on my projects.
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Moreover
, he plays instruments which cause loud noise and it is so disruptive that it affects my concentration in my work and it takes more time than required to finish my test results.
I would to have a single bedroom for myself, which can help me in my studies. If there are any extra costs required, you can let me know and I will pay the same.
I am looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
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