How has the modern eating habits changed? Discuss it's influence on our generation?
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habits is
based on culture and it changes Change the verb form
are
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across
accross
the world. It is Correct your spelling
across
also
one of the essentials
needs Change the noun form
essential
of
our life. Globalization and modernization Change preposition
in
plays
a major role in the changes Change the verb form
play
of
eating behaviour. Today's Change preposition
in
food
habit has detrimental effects on our health compared to the
traditional cuisines.
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apply
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with, there are many meritis
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merits
contemporary
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the contemporary
method
. They are ready-made and easily available. It Fix the agreement mistake
methods
also
saves times
so that we can use our effort in work and earn our living efficiently. Fix the agreement mistake
time
Moreover
, Since many cuisines are made available through
the globe, people feel they are close to Change preposition
throughout
relative
and Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
culture
. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
For instance
, the vegetables available in tropical countries can be packed as Frozen food
and imported Correct your spelling
across
accross
other countries. Correct your spelling
across
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Even though
Eventhough
these products do not cause major ailments, there will be minor Correct your spelling
Even though
illness
due to regular consumption.
Despite them being easily available, studies show that millions of people suffer from health issues Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
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unknowing
unkonowing
due to our Correct your spelling
unknown
food
habits. This
can be due to nutrition
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the nutrition
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from
fom
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from
tradition
meals which are high in protein and carbohydrates to modern meals which Replace the word
traditional
has
high fat, calories and sugar content. Regular consumption of diets with high fat and calories can lead to obesity, chronic Change the verb form
have
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disease
diesease
and vitamin deficiency. Correct your spelling
diseases
For example
, Junk foods and processed foods contain high
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a high
level
of sodium, which is used to preserve the Fix the agreement mistake
levels
food
. If you consume them daily, you will get high vitamin deficiency
.
To conclude, there are more negative consequences in our contemporary eating habits than the traditional diets. To minimize the impact on health , it is better to Fix the agreement mistake
deficiencies
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our own vegetables and cook our own Correct your spelling
garden
meal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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