Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issue of tackling
gender
stereotypes has engendered considerable controversies. While many assert that universities ought to provide the same number of seats for both genders in each major, I personally disagree the
concept as it will greatly disadvantage Change preposition
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for
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apply
students
.
A good reason to avoid enrolling in equal females and males is that it is unfair. Students
, that is
, must tend to get a place at university
in a particular subject
on the basis of either getting good marks in high school or passing an examination for entering university
instead
of considering gender
. In other words
, if this
rule admitting students
to be based on gender
is implemented, many students
having good grades and wishing
to Wrong verb form
wish
enroll
in a specific Change the spelling
enrol
subject
fail to achieve their goals. Hence
, the more students
work very hard and do not catch their goals, the more they are likely to become deeply depressed. This
in turn has a far-reaching negative impact on their performance, affecting manifold aspects of their personal life.
Another point to consider is that selecting subjects by gender
means that there is a vast variety of fields having different preferences. Take technical majors as the most patently obvious example; although
they are typically more inclined by boys, females prefer to study creative subjects including architecture and interior design. when focusing on gender
, we will have worse results for students
, and probably encourage them to leave university
before graduating because this
subject
is not their favorite
.
In conclusion, whereas people may vary in their opinions, I subscribe to the view that Change the spelling
favourite
students
do not need to have equal seats in each subject
on the basis of gender
due to being not fair, and it is better to consider merit for entering university
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite