It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suitable to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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of

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rearing has become a controversial argument. Whilst some proponents emphasize that women should shoulder

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, some opponents and I hold a diverse stance because women nowadays are working, and men are able to be responsible for

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nurturing. In

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essay, my contention will be

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elaborated. On the one hand, despite the fact that

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are sharing

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equal

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with their husbands in work and raising financial status,

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are the ones who look after toddlers.

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means that when working mothers give birth, they are asked to work and raise

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is the

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over whelming

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majority of Egyptian mothers who work indoors and outdoors.

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, what can be said is that the pressure put on

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' shoulders

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significantly heavy and draining.

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,

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task can be easily accomplished by fathers, but some actions should be taken to help them involve in

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upbringing

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.

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, if men attend parenting courses, they will be able to deal with their

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.

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can be witnessed in Germany which holds the record as the

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country with parenting programs.

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, in a final analysis, males are able to share responsibilities with

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their mothers

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essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only do

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have to raise infants, but

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it is the

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of men. Eventually, I am a staunch believer that without

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exhausting tasks, women could not have been drained.