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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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In
this
 contemporary world, there are lots of things which make people's minds occupied.One of them is the issue of print statements and ebooks.Whether printed newspapers or
books
 will be replaced by the internet is not controversy-free.In
this
 essay,I will elaborate on
this
 topic and draw some conclusions. In my opinion, there are some benefits to it, but there are still some disadvantages to
this
 social situation.
To begin
 with, people tend to read articles or
books
 online nowadays due to the fast and convenient internet ,but there are too many types of information on social media that we may lose our focus reading.
Moreover
,some people think that it is cheaper or even free online so that they don't have to spend any money for paying in order to read any kind of information and can reduce the space to store
books
.
For example
, students in college always need to bring a lot of
books
 to school,as a consequence,more and more students tend to buy online statements to reduce the inconvenience of carrying
books
. The main difference between online
books
 and physical papers is memory and lifestyle.
First
 and foremost, physical
books
 or newspapers could remind them of something, so it might be someone who brought it to them, or it could be the reason why they choose to read it.
Second
 and
moreover
, each book has a different paper texture and feelings,which make them sophisticated and special.
Last
 but not least, science shows that reading
books
 can help develop our logical thing and avoid to be Alzheimer's.For all of these reasons, there is no way online things will replace them. In conclusion,
although
 there will be fewer and fewer publishing the physical book and newspapers, printed organizations won't be disappeared permanently due to their value and contents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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