One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hello. I am writing
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recommendation letter for the camp manager to suggest my friend for a sports trainer at your summer school camp. My friend's name is Tom, I have known him for the
last
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three years. We did our graduation programme at the same university and stayed together in the same room for two years,
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, I got a chance to know him in person.
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, he has a cooperative and adaptive attitude throughout his work,
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, he can easily align with others. He is highly passionate about achieving his goals and acting creatively encounters hardships. As far as I know, he has some silver and gold medals in national and international physical strength competitions.
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, he was educated at a physical school and their high-level coach was acquired by him which is validated till 2028.
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, he has been working as a skilled trainer at Felex GYM for about three years. As I mentioned, through his experience and with due attention to your occupation opportunity requirements, I firmly believe that you will meet your necessities by hiring him. Please do not hesitate to contact me at any time. I attached my phone number and email address to the letter. Your Sincery Isa Azim
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and develops it fully. Group related information together and use cohesive devices effectively to guide the reader through your argument or narrative.
task achievement
Adopt a more consistent and formal tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for a recommendation to a camp manager. Additionally, you should proofread your letter to avoid grammatical errors and inappropriate word choices that may confuse the reader or hinder communication.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ardent enthusiast
  • physical education
  • sportsmanship
  • pragmatic approach
  • diligence
  • team spirit
  • engaging personality
  • mentorship
  • leadership qualities
  • communication skills
  • first-aid certified
  • discipline
  • adaptability
  • youth mentor
  • enthusiastic
  • influential coach
  • role model
  • positive reinforcement
  • camaraderie
  • empathy
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