With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more recourses. To what extent do you agree?

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The desire for fossil-fueled
resources
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are
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rising globally. Most
people
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believe that some places in the world that are still not discovered should be allocated to finding more
resources
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. I am in absolute agreement with
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statement as I believe
people
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should not be accessed to
use
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undiscovered
areas
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to get more
resources
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. The main reason why we shouldn’t
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undiscovered
areas
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to get more
resources
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is
because
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it will definitely pollute the environment.
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, mining, logging, and other activities can cause the ecosystem to be damaged.
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, plants and animals that inhabit those
areas
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are being killed just because we need more
resources
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.
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, in many
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multiple forests have been destroyed for mining, logging and other activities that ruin the environment.
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, a lot of species of animals are becoming extinct and endangered just because
people
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need more
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.
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of using unknown
areas
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for mining or logging, we could
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that land for harnessing other green
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.
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,
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are environmentally friendly in marked contrast with
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fossil-fueled
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fossil fueled
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recourses.
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, wind power,
hydro power
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hydropower
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, solar power and so on. We can
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the undiscovered land to install machines
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as wind turbines.
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, numerous
of
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countries all over the world are switching from using
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fossil fueled
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resources
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to renewable
resources
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. To conclude, even though
people
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are still trying to preserve the biosphere, using undiscovered places for finding more
resources
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are
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still very harmful
for
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the environment and the flora and fauna.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • energy security
  • renewable energy
  • economic growth
  • biodiversity
  • environmental impact
  • geopolitical tensions
  • investment opportunities
  • job creation
  • energy supply diversification
  • sustainable development
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • indigenous rights
  • technological advancements
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