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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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life style
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leading life in the best
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food and diet
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, with exercise is a balance. Is not about eating only vegetables and fruit, a
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 can be helpful, avoiding the consumption of foods that
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 excess sugar
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 drink, and
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 fat like fast food, sleeping 8 hours a day is very important. Is not only eating
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 a good relationship with family, friends and
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 is important. Because de body and mind are so connected if both are healthy we would
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 a healthy
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life style
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. Talking about anxiety is a
mental emotional
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other
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 disorder. Young people are more vulnerable, anxiety is a feeling
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 and causes the person to feel nervous, very strong
headeaches
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, they are generally angry, they live worried about problems in the family, with friends or maybe for money in the house, bored and tired
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simptoms
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their
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 difficult to identify, they need
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professional
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 help, they suffer a lot and everything affects them. On many
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 they come to suicide, alcoholism, drugs, and many bad decisions for their lives.
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dangeruos
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 because as I explained before and seeing the differences, the body and the mind are connected and work together, it is important to take care of both to be healthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical conditioning
  • athleticism
  • physical training
  • muscle strength
  • mental resilience
  • psychological preparedness
  • mental toughness
  • confidence
  • precision
  • focus
  • mental strategies
  • mental fortitude
  • brute strength
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