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Many people use distance learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much attending college or universities. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

#people #distance #program #study #home #benefit #college #universities
In spite of the popularity of remote learning among
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learners of recent years, individuals are divided in their opinion that
such
 home school can be as
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 as studying directly in any educational
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. I think learning from
distance
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 is
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 in some cases but it can not completely be a substitute for institutional education. In the subsequent paragraphs,
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 will be reasoning my stands for studying at institutions.
To begin
 with, learning is a process that often
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feedbacks
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. In
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 of
of
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institutions
intitutions
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institutions
 like school , college or universities
one
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 peers or teachers help them to find out their mistakes which is near to impossible for programs designed for learning at home.
For instance
,
i
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 had to complete
one
 of my undergrad semesters through online
classes
 due to
prevailing
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 lockdown during
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 breakout. Though
i
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 secured
up to
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the mark scores
but
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i
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 found myself struggling in the
next
 semester as many of the previous courses were related to the current
one
 that
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 could not
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 properly over online
classes
.
Consequently
, my score went down.
Therefore
, it is always better to attend
classes
 physically
instead
 of attending remotely. Another point worth
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mentioning
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 a degree obtained from an
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institution
instituion
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institution
 not only master
one
 on that particular degree subject but
also
 it
taugh
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taught
tough
 to be disciplined,
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networking
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 mentality which is barely possible to include in
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remotely taught programs.
For example
, students are bound to follow the instructions during the
scooling
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schooling
cooling
 hours which make the sense of discipline and
also
 attending
classes
 with diverse learners
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 them create a larger network to
further
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about
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the study they are learning. To conclude,
instituitional
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institutional
 learning programs will be always on top of learning remotely at home.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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