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In the future nobody will buy printed news papers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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It is believed that demand
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 newspapersews p or
book
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books
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 will be reduced because of the improvement in the online sphere
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people
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 do not have to spend extra money on them. Personally,
i
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 reckon that online reading will be a dominant part of human beings.
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newspaperspapers
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newspapers papers
 and
books
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 harm the environment and
is
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 high-costed,
can
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and can
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 not be afforded by most
people
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.
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 of all, manufacturing paper-based
production
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 requires cutting trees
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 damaging
the
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nature and polluting
air
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the air
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. It is commonly believed that producing
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newspapers
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news papers
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newspapers
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 and
books
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let
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led
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 to global warming
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is
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happened because of an increase in carbon dioxide
level
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levels
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 in the atmosphere.
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, the investigation from Drexel university that was performed by Doctor Mark demonstrated that demolishing every 100 trees produces 7% of carbon dioxide
to
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 the atmosphere.
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, greenhouse gases are the reason for the depletion of the
ozon
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ozone
 layer.
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 of all, many
people
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 from
third
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 world countries can not afford expensive
books
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,
news papers
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newspapers
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that is
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 the main reason for the ignorance of humans.
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, the budget of some countries is not enough to provide school
books
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, classic, detective ones to libraries.
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, some
people
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 are able to afford
books
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 to read for pleasure while human beings from developing counties can not even purchase school
books
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 which
are
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 the main reason for social inequality in the world.
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, the majority of
people
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 prefer reading the online version of newspapers and
books
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.
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, the requirement for computer-based
books
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 in increasing in the
last
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 decade. To sum up, the future generation will prefer reading the online versions of
books
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 and
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newspapers
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news papers
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newspapers
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 which is
the
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an
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 affordable and eco-friendly way of studying.
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