Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's degree-based society, more and more young people are racing to

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in universities, which are seen as symbols of success in their studies.

However

, some argue that universities should only accept

students

with very excellent academic results,

while

others believe that all

students

should be given equal opportunities to access academic disciplines.

University

. I will discuss both sides and clearly portray my personal views in the essay below.  On the one hand, a large

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of people

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that admitting only young, academically gifted individuals is unfair to

students

who do poorly in school. The understandable reason is that their achievements in school do not reflect their potential for success in college. It is

therefore

unethical to refuse registration requests by some

students

, especially in

this

society, where formal qualifications are considered more essential than actual experience when recruiting.

Furthermore

, providing higher education opportunities for a high proportion of young people not only opens an equal footing for

students

to have better future career prospects

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but

also

helps maintain a diverse community format, where each student is appreciated and rewarded for their abilities.

For example

, a 60-year-old man with a poor memory but still studying hard and having the same amount of knowledge as a college student deserves praise compared to an 18-year-old

university

student. 

However

, in the opposite direction, the benefits will be maximized through numerous arguments and many practical cases.

Firstly

, high school

students

with good grades deserve to go to college

instead

of dull

students

who are slow to absorb and do not understand what the teacher explains.

This

is because

students

with

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memory, logical thinking and management skills need to be fostered and study intensively in their areas of aptitude, creating talented citizens who will contribute to their career development of the national economy

as well as

future scientific achievements.

Secondly

, by providing the academy to a limited number of

students

, professors and teaching assistants can more easily assess

students

' ability and skill levels during the teaching process, resulting in

students

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.

For example

, Vietnam National

University

of Politics, one of the most prestigious universities in Vietnam, only accepts valedictorians for the national

university

entrance exam to ensure that all recruiters are qualified well qualified and able to handle a huge amount of specialized knowledge.  In summary,

although

it seems that there are many advantages to admitting all

students

to the

University

, I believe that

university

study is only for

students

who have the necessary health and knowledge to not only ensure the quality of life input earmark but

also

the output level.