Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's degree-based society, more and more young people are racing to
enroll
in universities, which are seen as symbols of success in their studies. Change the spelling
enrol
However
, some argue that universities should only accept students
with very excellent academic results, while
others believe that all students
should be given equal opportunities to access academic disciplines. University
. I will discuss both sides and clearly portray my personal views in the essay below.
On the one hand, a large quantity
of people Change the quantifier
number
argue
that admitting only young, academically gifted individuals is unfair to Change the verb form
argues
students
who do poorly in school. The understandable reason is that their achievements in school do not reflect their potential for success in college. It is therefore
unethical to refuse registration requests by some students
, especially in this
society, where formal qualifications are considered more essential than actual experience when recruiting. Furthermore
, providing higher education opportunities for a high proportion of young people not only opens an equal footing for students
to have better future career prospects,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
helps maintain a diverse community format, where each student is appreciated and rewarded for their abilities. For example
, a 60-year-old man with a poor memory but still studying hard and having the same amount of knowledge as a college student deserves praise compared to an 18-year-old university
student.
However
, in the opposite direction, the benefits will be maximized through numerous arguments and many practical cases. Firstly
, high school students
with good grades deserve to go to college instead
of dull students
who are slow to absorb and do not understand what the teacher explains. This
is because students
with good
memory, logical thinking and management skills need to be fostered and study intensively in their areas of aptitude, creating talented citizens who will contribute to their career development of the national economy Add an article
a good
as well as
future scientific achievements. Secondly
, by providing the academy to a limited number of students
, professors and teaching assistants can more easily assess students
' ability and skill levels during the teaching process, resulting in students
High quality
Add a hyphen
High-quality
graduate
. Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
For example
, Vietnam National University
of Politics, one of the most prestigious universities in Vietnam, only accepts valedictorians for the national university
entrance exam to ensure that all recruiters are qualified well qualified and able to handle a huge amount of specialized knowledge.
In summary, although
it seems that there are many advantages to admitting all students
to the University
, I believe that university
study is only for students
who have the necessary health and knowledge to not only ensure the quality of life input earmark but also
the output level.Submitted by trancaomaitrang on
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.
