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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The number of
adults
 who still live with their
parents
 is increasing nowadays.
Although
 I acknowledge
such
 living arrangements offer advantages, I feel the downsides are considerably more serious. On the one hand, staying with family members adds numerous benefits for
adults
 after graduation.
Firstly
, saving money and time is the biggest advantage compared to living away from home,
therefore
 facing a lot of bills from electricity, water, and household expenses is not a burden in times of crisis. Especially in a hard time of the
covid
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 pandemic, it is good to have financial support from their
parents
 and share household work to optimize time-saving for work at home.
Next,
emerging
adults
 have a constant and readily available source of help and support,
for example
, some healthy and delicious home-cooked meals prepared for the whole day or looked after in many facets as health and motivation.
As a result
, people continually living under the same roof will learn about the importance of family values
as well as
 appreciate the strong relationships with their family members. As
the
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 result, people continually living under the same roof will learn about the importance of family values
as well as
 appreciate the strong relationships with their family members.
On the other hand
, certain
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 effects harmed adult development in the long run.
To begin
 with, by limiting their space and privacy, some
parents
 are severely limiting their relationship, job circumstances, and even their nightlife. They lived in a
pattern
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 environment, which contributes to the prevalence of psychological and mental problems.
Furthermore
, they lack independence and responsibility for their lives in certain circumstances; emerging
adults
 just obey their
parents
' directions and are unable to think creatively outside the box.
As a result
, individuals may struggle to acquire the ability to successfully break down boundaries in their workplace or community. In conclusion, living with relatives is a possible choice for people who have some good support from their
parents
. I feel that the disadvantages outweigh them
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 and that the biggest detrimental influence on them is the loss of future independence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cohabitation
  • intergenerational living
  • self-sufficiency
  • financial stability
  • maturation
  • dependency
  • socio-economic factors
  • familial dynamics
  • personal autonomy
  • housing affordability
  • cultural expectations
  • life trajectory
  • emotional resilience
  • nuclear family
  • joint family system
  • economic prudence
  • privacy concerns
  • social stigma
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