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Some people think that living in a country for a period of time is needed to learn the language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are many people who believe that everyone must spend some years living in a foreign
country
 to have a good understanding of
language
 and culture. I strongly agree that anyone who wants to teach a new
language
 should visit the
country
 where citizens speak it.
To begin
 with, there are so many languages that require not just a knowledge of rules and grammar, but
also
 an understanding of traditions and national peculiarities.
For example
, Russian users always use sarcasm in conversation and sometimes it is really hard to recognise it for tourists due to it
is
Wrong verb form
being
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 based on the circumstances in which it was said.
Hence
, if a student wishes to know where sarcasm is usually used, he needs to be in that moment nearby and talk face-to-face with the original people.
However
, sometimes it can be too stressful for newbies to meet a foreign person and there can be some misunderstanding between them.
Moreover
, studying a
language
 abroad can be much easier than in a person's original
country
, because there are many
language
 foundations which help to find accommodations and the best tutors for learning. These organisations can reduce the level of stress affected students when they will come to another
country
.
Although
, some individuals might not be able to afford it due to the high cost of their efforts. In conclusion,
this
 tendency is very beneficial for anyone who wants to know a new
language
 and it
also
 helps to keep cultural diversity in countries over the globe.
Thus
, it should be promoted among students by the government so would everyone knows about it and tried to live abroad for at least a year.
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