Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what you like about the uniform explain what you don’t like about the uniform suggest how the uniform can be improved

Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing
this
letter to express my happiness regarding the introduction of a new
uniform
at our company. It has been a decade since the staff working in our company wore the same old-fashioned dress every day at the office;
however
,
this
new
uniform
is fancy, and it will enhance the personality of our employees
besides
giving them a fresh look.
Additionally
, I like the stuff
along with
the new style of it.
Although
everyone is satisfied with the new
uniform
, I think the colour of the
uniform
is too bright which is neon green.
Not to mention
, it would not be suitable for the summer season. Since people prefer to wear some light colours in summer, the colour of the
uniform
should be changed. It would be great if
this
new
uniform
would be in a light green shade as it will suit everyone for all seasons. I thank you for your time and consideration in advance. Yours sincerely, Amandeep Kaur
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task achievement
You have provided a clear and complete response to the prompt. However, consider adding specific examples or elaborating on why a lighter color is preferred for the summer to improve your task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
Your letter follows a logical structure and has well-organized paragraphs. Still, making explicit transitions between paragraphs can further enhance readability.
task achievement
Your tone is highly appropriate for writing to a manager, demonstrating respect and professionalism.
coherence cohesion
You have an effective greeting and closing, which contributes to the formality and completeness of the letter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduced
  • appreciation
  • pleasing
  • professional image
  • elegant
  • sophistication
  • professionalism
  • high quality
  • appearance
  • comfort
  • modern
  • stylish
  • tailored
  • sleek lines
  • polished
  • discomfort
  • relaxed
  • adjustable
  • beneficial
  • aesthetics
  • commitment
  • valued
  • enhance
  • modifications
  • impression
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