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In some countries around the world, men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In many developed countries, there are more and more parents
tend
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 to have babies late in their lives. The change in the family role of a female, economic development and the awareness of
women
’s rights are the reasons for
this
 phenomenon. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss the causes of it and the reasons why I consider it to be a negative development.
To begin
 with,
women
 do not need to take whole responsibility for taking care of children in modern society.
Moreover
, gender equality encourages females to pursue their
career
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 which leads to postponing the time of giving birth later. Take Taiwan as an example, more and more
women
 dedicate their lives to their careers.
Therefore
, they tend to choose to keep working for promotions and higher
payment
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 which postpones the plan of having babies. The proportion of older pregnant
women
 has risen to 32% in 2021.
On the other hand
, many scientists are worried about Advanced Maternal Age. Some diseases and symptoms are contributed
from
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 elderly pregnant
women
 which are the major consequences of having a baby late in life.
For instance
, Down syndrome is a common disease for having a baby late. The risk will be increased by 50 times compared with pregnant
women
 aged below 34 years old. In conclusion, gender equality and the increase in the number of career
women
 in modern society are the reasons for
this
 phenomenon.
However
, babies are more likely to be born with a disability which is the main negative effect caused by it.
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