Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree?
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face. However
, whether or not people
should study in school
from lessons
with their teachers
is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I believe that people
can learn more knowledge than from lessons
.
It is obvious that with developed technology, distance learning is becoming more comfortable and convenient. That means people
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and online
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skills
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resources
resource
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resources
lessons
with their teachers
.
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their teachers
try to explain the knowledge very clearly. Sometimes, some skills
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