Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking, dressing.... should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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what kind of education should be given to students.

Although

the benefits of the lessons like math, literature or biology are easily seen sometimes people tend to ignore the impact of learning everyday

life

skills

such

as cooking or dressing.

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essay will explore arguments for both sides of the discussion and provide

detailed

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analysis to readers. Schools must provide good academic lessons like math, history or physics but the aim of

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goal should not be passing the

exam

or

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an A+ on their

exam

result which won’t be useful in real

life

. The purpose should be

teach

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to

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them to

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think rationally or be more precise with their past or be aware of how nature works.

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using

exam

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could be useful to help kids to learn because

without

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any force, they won’t be motivated to learn

this hard topics

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such

as algebra or the laws of Newton.

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the other hand, a lot of successful people reached their

goal

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because of their soft

skills

not because

of

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they were good at getting

perfect

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score

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on every

exam

. School

also

must be a place to gain the abilities from easy tasks, it might

be seem

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not useful at the beginning

however

these kind

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this kind

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of chores have the potential to teach something. One clear example is that while doing the laundry,

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a person

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person

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people

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learn how to organise and become better with their time

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management

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managements

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management

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skills

. In conclusion, children spend most of their time in classes,

listening

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the teacher which plays an important role in their

life

but another option could

be take

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them to

outside

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the outside

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of the classroom and help them to gain soft

skills

which

is

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harder to ignore the benefits in both daily and business

life

.