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Many students have to study ssubjects which they donot like. Some people think this is complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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 debate whether the whole
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curriculum
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curriculum
 should be studied by the children even though they
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do not
don't
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do not
 like
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 of the subjects . Many feel that it is
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unnecessary
necessary
uncessary
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unnecessary
 to study so much but other disagree
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 it . In my
opinion
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 having a basic knowledge of all the
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subject
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subjects
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 is very crucial and it can
helps
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help
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 us to
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life
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 our
life
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 in a better manner . A fundamental reason is it helps to understand our
world
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 in a better way ,
now a days
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nowadays
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 people are globally connected and the common link between everyone in English,
thus
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 learning a new language helps to understand each other and reduces are distances .
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, having
common
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a common
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 understanding of the topics decreases the dependency
of
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 others in our
life
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 .
For example
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, in
Japan
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,Japan
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 the courses are vast to every part of the
world
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 and they
also
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teaches
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teach
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 them
implication
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the implication
an implication
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 of their study in
real
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the real
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world
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 .
In addition
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 to
this
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 , it is felt that students
needs
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 to understand and test themselves
first
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 to make a decision that which
subject
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 is like by them and
they
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apply
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want to
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pursue
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purse
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pursue
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 in near future.
However
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, people find it difficult to stick around one
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subjects
sujects
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subject
 nowadays ,
therefore
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 it is necessary to have
basic
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a basic
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 understanding of all the topics.
Somethings
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Some things
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 which we learn in our school like Maths , Science , Social Science ,
languages
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and languages
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 are related to
practical
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the practical
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world
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 and
thus
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it
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apply
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should be studied thoroughly . If not learn properly we would create blunders in our
life
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. In conclusion , every
subject
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 is important and should be
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studied
stuffed
stufied
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studied
 but we must
specialzation
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specialization
specialisation
 in one
subject
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 after
attaing
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attaining
 basic knowledge of
all
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apply
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the
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curriculum
curriculam
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curriculum
.

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