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From the presentation part of Mai Ngoc, you have seen and understand the reality of
pollution
in the environment in general and the Nhue
river
in particular
. But what is the reason for
this
? Well, there are many explanations.
AIR
POLLUTION
Air
pollution
is the introduction of harmful chemicals into the atmosphere. Sometimes,
air
pollution
is visible. The exhaust from trucks,
for instance
, pollutes the
air
with toxic chemicals
such
as carbon monoxide and formaldehyde. Natural disasters can
also
cause
air
pollution
to increase quickly.
For
example
, when volcanoes erupt, they eject volcanic ash and gases into the atmosphere. After the eruption of the Indonesian volcano of Krakatoa in 1883, ash darkened the sky around the world.
WATER
POLLUTION
Some polluted
water
looks muddy, smells terrible, and has garbage floating in it. Some contaminated
water
looks clean but is filled with harmful chemicals you can’t see or smell. There are many reasons for
water
pollution
like people dumping their daily waste into rivers, lakes,… A typical and practical
example
is our Nhue
river
. The main cause of environmental
pollution
in the Nhue
River
is untreated wastewater or improper treatment before being discharged into the environment. People
also
dump their waste in the
water
too freely that the
water
and the
air
around the
river
are polluted. For a wider
example
, an oil spill which is the leakage of petroleum onto the surface of a large body of
water
can pollute the ocean.
For
example
, the largest marine oil spill in U.S. history was the Deepwater Horizon spill. Before it was capped three months later, approximately 134 million gallons of oil had
spilled
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into the ocean, threatening our ocean ecosystem. LAND
POLLUTION
Many of the same pollutants that foul the
water
also
harm the land. Pesticides and fertilizers from agricultural fields are blown by the wind. They can harm plants, animals, and people who eat the harmed vegetables. Trash is another form of land
pollution
. Around the world, paper, cans, glass jars, plastic products, and junked cars and appliances mar the landscape. Litter makes it difficult for plants and other producers in the food web to create nutrients. Animals can die if they mistakenly eat plastic.
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