You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding one of the staff who really helped me a lot during my
last
visit. I am new to
this
community and I was wondering about purchasing basic groceries and home needs. Fortunately, as soon as I entered the supermarket, an employee whose name is Ramya approached me and asked exactly what I am looking for. I explained my situation and asked for her assistance in buying those products. She not only stayed with me almost for 1-hour but
also
guided me patiently on how to set up a new home with minimal things. In
this
regard, I was completely moved by her gesture and her hospitality. I believe that
such
type of workers is much needed not only to enhance company's growth but
also
to maintain a good relationship with the public. I would certainly share
this
good experience with my community members. I am delighted to share
this
with you. Yours sincerely, P.Praveena
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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