Some people think that, it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems.

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studying
literature
who thinks that it is much waste of
time
subject in high
school
. I totally dispute
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opinion, which I believe that
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not only reading and writing
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articles could improve talents, it
also
helps the students to change their worldwide.
To begin
with, the main reason why I argue with mentioned opinion is that studying
literature
could help high
school
learners to develop their reading and writing involved skills. It can
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open- minding ideas for speaking. When
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offspring spend enough
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reading every day.
Moreover
, they could have the ability to read faster and understand the texts better than those who do not have that habit. The result in being benefits via poems and novels. The students could learn some essential examples.
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their tests.
For instance
, experiments had been shown that, if people do not spend
time
reading or writing for quite a long
time
. They will start to lose their talents. Another argument is that
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classical
literature
has become old in every
school
has
literature
. The teenagers are still learning
literature
in high
school
and teaching. They could soon realise what subject it their points.
As a result
, they are choosing majors for college and university
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been significantly reduced.
Therefore
, they will have the opportunity to choose a profession.
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they are divided in different directions. For
this
reason, their abilities will increase even more in
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regard. In my conclusion, there
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to believe that
literature
is
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for all grades below university. I believe that
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it is
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opositive
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step to encourage the pupils to try their best in every subject as they are noticeably beneficial.
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