Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people’s standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives. Do you agree or disagree?

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The importance of modern life which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject

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the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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on facilities. Previously, men used to do a lot of

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more happiness and

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. Another striking reason in

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experiences into virtual life. It is worth noting,

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the help of social media everyone can talk to their dear ones but at

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time nobody cares to meet

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and create memorable moments. Probing ahead

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people’s standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

What can we learn from the boys' experience about the nature of power and leadership?

Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,

Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?