Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think other factors such as television, friend, music. etc. gave biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rapid change
of
social media, the transmission of information has become increasingly fast. Some people look upon families have the most powerful influence on a child’s development. Whereas others refer to other factors as having powerful effects on Change preposition
in
children
. As for my perspective, I am in favour of the former and the reasons will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.
Firstly
, parents can directly share their though
with their child clearly and use the words they could understand to explain. Correct your spelling
thought
In other words
, children
would receive the relatedly correct thought that had been fillted
by their parents, Correct your spelling
filled
this
would help children
follow the right way to develop themselves. Secondly
, kids would spend more time accompany
each other Wrong verb form
accompanying
that
causes them to mimic other families' behaviour and thought what they trust without hesitation Correct word choice
which
this
lead to families having a most powerful effect than other factors
On the other hand
, through television, video ,music or advertisements, children
could be directly affected by businessmen or society. That is
, children
would get various information and influences from the world. Take my experience for example
. When I was a child, this
different image or voice have powerfully attractive to me that I cannot resist. Furthermore
, the idea from the advertisements made by businessmen always evoked my desire to buy the things that I did not really need but that are not suitable for children
.
In conclusion, parents can directly share their though
with their Correct your spelling
thought
child
and give correct ideas to help the Fix the agreement mistake
children
children
develop their own though. It has a more powerful influence than other factors that just give children
various information without checking on development
themselves.Correct pronoun usage
their development
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