Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are times when we encountered
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unfavorable
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situations whether it was the lack of money,
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from a job, or businesses in a financial crisis. It is widely argued
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the best way to overcome these experiences is. It is the opinion of some that we should accept the result as it is. While others contested that we should try to overcome the situation. It is the belief of some that we should succumb to
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bad experiences.
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situation that we faced ,there are lessons to be learnt from it.
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, A businessman who
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to
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through
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a
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financial crisis
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his company, will
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an important lesson from
this
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As a result
, the businessman will
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comeback
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stronger than ever. If the crisis
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manage to occur again, he's now ready to take up the challenge
this
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On the other hand
, trying to improve the occurrence is
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better
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said by others. Because it allows us to achieve what is unachievable previously
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if
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push forward.
For example
, SAT
score
, your dream university required
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SAT
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and you only got 1300, if you choose to accept the
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as it is you will never be able to get into your dream university.
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, if you do not give up and continue to study to
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improve your
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, you might eventually get the
score
you needed to get accepted. To conclude, it is far better in my opinion to try to overcome the incident no matter how bad it is, because might we be able to achieve our dreams if we do so. As compared to accepting the results which will never let you
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be able to meet your goal.
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  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
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