Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are times when we encountered
with
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unfavorable
situations whether it was the lack of money, Change the spelling
unfavourable
fired
from a job, or businesses in a financial crisis. It is widely argued Add a missing verb
being fired
that
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what
the best way to overcome these experiences is. It is the opinion of some that we should accept the result as it is. While others contested that we should try to overcome the situation.
It is the belief of some that we should succumb to Correct pronoun usage
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the
bad experiences. Correct article usage
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Every
situation that we faced ,there are lessons to be learnt from it. Change preposition
In every
For instance
, A businessman who manage
to Change the verb form
manages
survived
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survive
through
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a
financial crisis Correct article usage
the
of
his company, will Change preposition
in
learned
an important lesson from Change the verb form
learn
this
. As a result
, the businessman will Correct your spelling
come back
comeback
stronger than ever. If the crisis Correct your spelling
come back
do
manage to occur again, he's now ready to take up the challenge Change the verb form
does
this
time.
On the other hand
, trying to improve the occurrence is much
better Correct article usage
a much
approach
said by others. Because it allows us to achieve what is unachievable previouslyAdd the particle
to approach
,
if Remove the comma
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you
push forward. Correct pronoun usage
we
For example
, SAT score
, your dream university required 1400
SAT Correct article usage
a 1400
score
and you only got 1300, if you choose to accept the score
as it is you will never be able to get into your dream university. In
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On
contrary
, if you do not give up and continue to study to Correct article usage
the contrary
try
improve your Add the particle
totry
score
, you might eventually get the score
you needed to get accepted.
To conclude, it is far better in my opinion to try to overcome the incident no matter how bad it is, because might we be able to achieve our dreams if we do so. As compared to accepting the results which will never let you to
be able to meet your goal.Change the verb form
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