You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter ro the singer. In your letter . say how you feel about his performance . give details of your musical activities . explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Sam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to you regarding your concert that was very well and in the end I enjoyed it a lot. Let me discuss bit more.

To begin

with, I want to say in the concert I had been feeling amazing at and I believe that was one of your best performances of yours.

Although

all music is nice you were great

last

night so I decided to learn me if you have time because I want to follow your way.

Moreover

, I have to say I have been training in an effort to learn to sing for about six years and during

this

time I can improve my knowledge and my ability.

However

, I think I must grow up more and more with your help. Please aim to me if you can spend time with me.

For instance

, I have a rich family and we can support you as sponsors and you help me to find my way as a teacher. Writing to your reply. Your Faithfully, Saeed Foroughi.

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