You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter ro the singer. In your letter . say how you feel about his performance . give details of your musical activities . explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Sam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to you regarding your concert that was very well and in the end I enjoyed it a lot. Let me discuss bit more.

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with, I want to say in the concert I had been feeling amazing at and I believe that was one of your best performances of yours.

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all music is nice you were great

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night so I decided to learn me if you have time because I want to follow your way.

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, I have to say I have been training in an effort to learn to sing for about six years and during

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time I can improve my knowledge and my ability.

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, I think I must grow up more and more with your help. Please aim to me if you can spend time with me.

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, I have a rich family and we can support you as sponsors and you help me to find my way as a teacher. Writing to your reply. Your Faithfully, Saeed Foroughi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

181 words

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