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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

#information #role #textbooks #universities #books #materials #situation
these days the
internet
 connects
any
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 else in our life and many people can use it for anything
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shopping
shoping
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shopping
, communication, and learning so, many students believe the
internet
 makes their life easy. the
internet
 has a lot of information that student has to need
such
 as e-books or any papers in one click on
his
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 phone or laptop when he
connect
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 with
the
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apply
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internet
for example
 google and
e-book
store
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stores
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 and can save it to reread at any time and anywhere that makes it more successful
also
, you can get a new paper or
e-book
 in few minutes from your home or any place and you do not need to go any traditional book store.
however
, the
e-book
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may be
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maybe
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may be
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 influenced
on
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by
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 many things
such
 as your eyes from the screen of your laptop
also
, it can affect your relationship if you stay at your home. in conclusion, I think
e-book
 is better than traditional bookstore because it is free and easy to get it.
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