Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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of our time. A man without

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good

education

,many of us believe, is

unfortunate

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victim of adverse circumstances. Nowadays,

university

education

is becoming more and more common and the

education

direction chosen by the

university

is different. Some people think the

skills

of

employment

are crucial ,but others consider

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academic

study

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a mere important thing . I believe the

skills

of

employment

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more significant. For the reason that

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employers prefer the

skills

of vocation.

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will discuss the point by the proficiency of the work. It is as clear as daylight that

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academic

study

is equally important as all the practices are based on it.

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, a

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would not be stably established if the designer did not have competent

knowledge

and a mortal patient would not be treated if the surgeon did not have enormous

knowledge

.

However

,it is far from enough for

university

students to

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be with academic

knowledge

. We can imagine that a great number of mistakes will overtake a fresh student graduating shortly ,it is not that he does not possess professional

knowledge

but that he does not experience it .

However

. the proficient skill of

employment

owned by the employees is highly regarded by company owners because it is a kind of saving money for bosses. When a recently graduated student possessing

skills

of

employment

is hired by a big corporation ,working directly without

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trained

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make

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the company run steadily but not

coming

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to a halt to wait for him. A

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constructed building

need

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a great of

laborers

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who have handled the architectural

skills

of

employment

to be established, and a

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decorated house

need

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a lots

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of workers who have mastered the relative skill to be dealt with. But if they needed time to be trained in

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vocation

instead

of in the

university

,they would not have competitive. In conclusion,the

university

should not focus on academic

study

only.it is not that

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academic

study

is not important but that the

skills

of

employment

is

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more than it.