Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
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letter to express my interest in an advertisement about looking for someone to stay with your family and to take care of your child.
To begin
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with, one reason why I like to work for you as I love taking care of a child and living in Australia.
Secondly
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, I have worked for five years as a teacher in a kindergarten in my country.
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, I accept that
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will be a chance for me to improve my English skills while I am there and I am able to move to your place without any hesitation.
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, I think
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role will suit me due to having so may experience in taking care of children and I am able to look after your children properly.
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, I have studied a lot of books and articles on how to deal with children and manage them.
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, I will use my free time effectively by learning languages while I am in Australia. Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your Faithfully, Sandar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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