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some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of society, each family has its own vehicle,
this
 has led to frequent traffic problems, many
people
 think the best way to improve
road
 safety is to increase
minimum
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 legal
age
 for driving cars and motorcycles , I totally agree that.
First
 of all , I think younger
people
have
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not
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no
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ability
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the ability
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 of inaccurate
judgment
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judgments
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 of
road
 conditions , they get excited and can not control themselves, and like
fast
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a fast
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car
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,
that
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they
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 maybe have
accidents
 , even lead injury or death. because younger
people
 tend to drive impulsively , the car speeds up ,
this
 is
also
 an important reason for
accidents
.
In
addition
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 driving
car
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a car
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 need a valid driver’s license
for
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on the
road
 ,
this
 condition
also
 needs to limit the
age
 ,
this
 is
also
 the requirement of the government to limit
age
 and skills.A
second
 observation to be made is that
,
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drivers are older
generally
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and generally
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 more responsible ,and can be responsible for themselves and their families ,they will be more mature and stable ,and
also
 obey the traffic rules, and respect others,
for example
 , if adults can handle
road
 traffic
accidents
 more calmly , while younger
people
 don’t know how to handle
accidents
. And are prone to
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unhealthy
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unhealth
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unhealthy
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behaviors
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behaviours
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such
 as excessive drinking and drug driving.
Nevertheless
 , the government might improve higher standards for testing
driver’s
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drivers’
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 ability to drive and prolong the training time ,
this
 can reduce the occurrence of
accidents
. All in all , I agree increase the minimum legal
age
 is
only
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the only
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 best way
for
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improve
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road
 safety.
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