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The picture given below demonstrates the process which converts raw
wool
 from
sheep
 to woollen items.
Firstly
, the main source of fur is
sheep
, and
then
 the process of shearing starts which means removing the skin of the
sheep
.After
this
 method, raw mohair is cleaned which in turn results in making goods of tweed.
Furthermore
, it undergoes spinning where raw fleece will be spun after
this
 procedure it will encounter drying in which the
wool
 is left out for some time. Following
this
 practice, dried
wool
 will be converted into tufts of
wool
 which are
further
 moulded into the form of strings which are used as a product to make manufactured goods. Tufts of
wool
 are preserved in storage.
wool
 has
transformedinto
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transformed into
a circles
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circles
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 which are called yarn. Alternatively, these round yarns are used for knitting clothes especially jackets, sweaters , carpets and many more products. In conclusion,
wool
 is very important for folks to bear the harsh winters ,particularly for the people living in hilly areas for that
sheep
 need to be preserved.
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