You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive Write at least 150 words.

#country #year #place #agency #accommodation #information

Dear sir or mam I am writing

this

letter to inquire about the accommodation you have in

Canada

. I am moving to

Canada

for one year, I do not have anyone to stay with. I am travelling to

Canada

for my study. I got enrolled in Lambton college for one year course in business management. As I am an introverted person or enjoy my own company, I would prefer an apartment with all utilities.

Moreover

, It should be clean and well-maintained. I can

also

live on sharing basis with girls.

Furthermore

, I will arrive in

Canada

on 20 December. So I need accommodation before reaching there.

Also

, I will pay my rent or all the cost in advance if that's needed. Hoping and looking forward to hearing from you. I would really appreciate it if you will help me to find a place to live. Regards, John

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

147 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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